Writing for love is a pas

I need you to finish it please! I'm dying of the suspense. I love your characters emotions and it's like I can actually see them taking place. That's exactly what ...

Hey, I'm only 13 and I've had more than my fair share of kisses with my ex-boyfreind! Keep writing!!

Thanks everyone! For once I got good feedback! :lol: I fixed it up a little, so I hope everything is right with it now! :wink:

Thanks for the tough advice. I fixed the poem up a little, And I think I like it better now. :mrgreen:

I don't really get it. Should be longer too. :smt085

deep man deep, it was good!

If I were that girl, I think I would fall for that poem because it rocks in a sweet way!

Hey wats up? I teared up a little reading your story, but it was great! Feel free to pm me!!

This is sad, but i am in the same situation! it's like you know he wants you, but he never comes and claims you, i loved the story!

As soon as I read that, my heart skipped a beat! The love was just so overwhelming that my own heart felt as if it were in the story,I LOVED ...

I like nonsense poetry... i can actually understand it!!

I liked it although I got Lost a lot in it!

I REALLY liked it! it shows the other side of the relationship. I never thought about it that way before! :smt003

I liked the deepness in it(although I have a small brain and got lost in some parts, I really liked it!)

I really liked it! I could relate to it and the little detail that you did put in made it just right! :smt040